Chapter 4 - Catching the Worm: Page 99

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Author comments on December 10, 2015

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  • Apvogt posted at December 10, 2015 9:19 am:

    That happened.

    • invisible posted at December 11, 2015 11:37 am:

      recall the first few pages when she died the weird arms of the evil spider took away something from her guts? now that empty space worked as a self defense mechanism and made her to split in half from her own stomach revealing whatever the hell of being is summoned through her to defend her I believe that all her visions and sights are hallucinations nothing else since the guards look normal again

  • dooomba posted at December 10, 2015 11:02 am:

    I have no idea what just happend, but cant wait for the next page.

  • MinionKing posted at December 10, 2015 3:19 pm:

    HOLY CARP SHE’S A MONSTER!!!! or some kind of monstrosity is using her as a portal for monsters
    as part of that deal she made (>__<)

  • Zades posted at December 10, 2015 4:41 pm:

    I can’t unsee this ever, My grandchildren will be told of the day I was mentally scarred.

  • Brian posted at December 10, 2015 8:22 pm:

    This is getting pretty HP Lovecraft. Cthulu is sure to appear soon. Quite a change from the intro, but I suppose the pentapig battle was warning shot.

  • Okami posted at December 11, 2015 3:10 am:

    Thanks for the nightmare fuel…

  • NotImportant posted at December 11, 2015 8:17 am:

    Read through the whole thing today and liked it a lot! I enjoyed both illustrations and story, will come back for more! Thank you!

  • invisible posted at December 11, 2015 11:34 am:

    so basically as a self defense mechanism her stomach opened her back fell away as something came outside of her own guts is this the powers the evil spider gave her? wow! and many thanks for 2 page update!

  • anonomoose posted at December 11, 2015 12:58 pm:

    those death metal albums were right…

  • the one who kills posted at December 11, 2015 4:40 pm:

    Poor book he must think he’s insane ?

  • Sunshine and Rainbows posted at December 11, 2015 5:00 pm:

    Bouquin’s like “She’s eating them. And then she’s going to eat me! OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD.”

  • I’m sure it’s just a stomach bug.

  • itblobboy posted at December 13, 2015 12:20 pm:

    Oh carp…

    I must say, when I realized what exactly I was seeing happening I was… For lack of a better word, entertained.

    “The story is gettin good >:o”

  • So are the soldiers seeing what she’s seeing?

  • the one who kills posted at December 13, 2015 10:28 pm:

    She said don’t come close :/

  • anonomoose posted at December 14, 2015 12:01 pm:

    welp, thats a MONSTROSITY of a moment. Eh, EH?

    im sorry, im not funny

  • KitApparently posted at December 15, 2015 11:38 am:

    When even Boquin is terrified

  • Michael posted at December 23, 2015 8:04 pm:

    Well then. My original theory on what was going on was half-right, but you threw me for a loop with the gut monster.

    Well played.

  • dragon posted at January 10, 2016 2:39 am:

    She was hallucinating; they wish they were hallucinating.

  • Neferius posted at January 13, 2016 10:44 am:

    That awkward moment when you realize the true monster was inside you all-along! ^^

  • Gwenhwyfar posted at March 11, 2016 1:18 pm:

    Sooo this is the story of Duo from SkullGirls?

  • Smaug posted at July 24, 2017 2:37 pm:

    Sheeet, she got possessionitis.

  • DocGenius42 posted at December 29, 2017 4:17 am:

    reminds me of Gluttony

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